Queen with no crown
(2nd Annual Issue Competition Poem)
-Sri sreya kurella
To every drop of tear around her ,
she kept her hands together
to hold ,
where she let her every single tear drop ,
to fall on her motherland .
she grabbed all the broken souls around her into her arms,
where she left all her pain by hugging the air .
she held people around in her heart,
where she carried all the pain in her stomach alone.
she takes in all the attributes of the queen ,
with no crown on her head ,
and all the commitment of a goddess ,
with getting no honour.
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Full name is sri sreya kurella . Studying degree 2nd year. Started writing poetry in telugu language while studying 2nd class. Recently started writing English poetry too . Published a book in telugu during 10th class . Book name : entha bavuntundi oh . Living location is Vijayanagaram , Andhrapradesh.
Very nice lines Sreyaa
So nice……. Nice line’s …..all the best.. Kp doing like this
Thank you so much
Wow … It’s really such a good Poem ..
Excellent
Such an amazing poem
Just loved the way you describe it in simple clear words
your short words makes a great difference in everyone’s thoughts… Keep going 
wishing you the very best dear
Nice poem ,keep going
Very nice
చాలా బాగుంది. Keep it up
చాలా బావుంది
Too beautiful
It’s very nice message
Excellent
It’s really a good poem…
I’m not much book reader… But I have studied this poem this was really awesome
It is really such a nice poem about a women in beautiful lines. It describes a splendid meaning.
Nice poem keep doing like this and all the best for u r future
That was good. I love the way you wrote keep going ALL THE BEST.
Great poetry.
Beautiful
Wowww it is really soo good.. ur words touched my heart
this small poem with less words told much more about the real existing goddess i.e the women.. felt very happy after reading this..
This was really a nice poem that I’ve seen…it was really good..
It seems like you are describing a women ..and her magic that she do around us…
You used simple words and neat vocabulary so that we can easily understand the meaning that what u want to convey others ..your doing good and it was a nice hobby just keep going on all the best!
Nice imagery. I don’t know if the subject of the poem is supposed to be a mother , a wife or in general a woman. But the selflessness has been spelled out effectively by the juxtapositions. Some suggestions on the grammar and verbiage though:
i) should use “while” instead of “where” – she kept her hands together to hold, while she let her every single teardrop fall on …
ii) technically the pain left her not the other way round. it can be worded as – while she let out all her pain by hugging the air
iii) with no crown on her head -> but without any crown on her head . with getting no honor -> but without getting any honor